Evaluation and self feedback

I have asked many of the target market what they think of our film and whether these would come under the the conventions of a typical action thriller film. i also asked them for some posotives and constructive criticism about the film this is what i got back from them.

Posotives

• A lot of effort has gone into the film
• The setting for the film is perfect and creates the feeling of being alone
• The intro is easy to understand and easy to follow.
• The match on actions are perfect and the film seems to flow easily.
• The fades to black create tension and you want to know what is going to happen in the rest of the film.

constructive criticism

• The "classified" title needs to appear longer
• The black at the end doesnt really do anything but you can still hear the music playing.
• The character changes from wearing a hoody to wearing a black top.
• You cant make out that the soldiers are the ones stamping on the character.

From  this i have learnt to make imporvements if i was going to make this film again i would make sure i  improve on the criticism in oder to make the best film possible. I have also learnt that i have made a very good film for the audience of the action thrillers.